Topic : The pride
a son to his beloved mother
My mother
is always very good to me and so valuable that sometimes I feel like I have no
words to describe her. I have been told by many of my friends that I never
really say what I feel, and the reason for this is because it is very hard for
me to express my feelings. Every time I am in a situation that I have to express
my feelings, I feel like my emotions are caged. The love I have for her is like
a rose of eternity, it will never die, but unlike a rose, it will prick not
only through my skin, but through my heart and soul. There are even some times
when my mother questions if I love her because I hardly ever show her.
Even
though I still haven it really expressed how I feel about my mother, I now have
the pleasure to speak my mind. Since I still struggle to express my feelings to
her, I decided to describe everything that I love about my precious mother in
written words.Every time I see my mother I have the benefit of taking in her beauty. My
Mother is light brown eyes are bright and lovely so that the richness of her
mind and soul there shines.
They flash red when right feels wrong to her. These
eyes also glow with warmth and tender lights of love. Her abundant black curls
fall softly on her beautiful face and feel softly upon my cheeks whenever I hug
her. She has loving hands that are so gentle, so kind, so soft that have toiled
smoothly through all the years.
The three great smiles that she has are 1)a
radiant smile that spreads such joy and sunshine on all that share her happy
heavenly life, 2)a smile that hides the pain of heart and soul, and 3)a smile
that lightens life is so bitter trials and brings such calm and peace to heavy
hearts. Her beautiful face has shone so pure and tranquil above my head through
all my life and dreams. The light brown eyes, the abundant curls, the smiles,
the silky smooth skin all blend serenely to form a lovely face.
posts that you make not a paragraph, but there many paragraph or called a eassy
BalasHapusi like your topic sentence , but your write many paragraph and minus conclusion
BalasHapusi think you describe about " your mom is always very good to you" but you dont describe how your mother make you happy or something else. you just describe about your phisically your mom
BalasHapusREVISI :
BalasHapusTopic : The pride a son to his beloved mother
My mother is always very good to me and so valuable that sometimes I feel like I have no words to describe her. I have been told by many of my friends that I never really say what I feel, and the reason for this is because it is very hard for me to express my feelings. Every time I am in a situation that I have to express my feelings, I feel like my emotions are caged. The love I have for her is like a rose of eternity, it will never die, but unlike a rose, it will prick not only through my skin, but through my heart and soul. There are even some times when my mother questions if I love her because I hardly ever show her.
Even though I still haven it really expressed how I feel about my mother, I now have the pleasure to speak my mind. Since I still struggle to express my feelings to her, I decided to describe everything that I love about my precious mother in written words.Every time I see my mother I have the benefit of taking in her beauty. My Mother is light brown eyes are bright and lovely so that the richness of her mind and soul there shines.
They flash red when right feels wrong to her. These eyes also glow with warmth and tender lights of love. Her abundant black curls fall softly on her beautiful face and feel softly upon my cheeks whenever I hug her. She has loving hands that are so gentle, so kind, so soft that have toiled smoothly through all the years.
The three great smiles that she has are 1)a radiant smile that spreads such joy and sunshine on all that share her happy heavenly life, 2)a smile that hides the pain of heart and soul, and 3)a smile that lightens life is so bitter trials and brings such calm and peace to heavy hearts. Her beautiful face has shone so pure and tranquil above my head through all my life and dreams. The light brown eyes, the abundant curls, the smiles, the silky smooth skin all blend serenely to form a lovely face.
Sometimes I feel do not want or go to work outside the home.
This all I feel good because of my mother, compassionate, meek, not rough and attention once with me.
one day when I go out of the House to the task and come homelate-night approximately 12 nights.
the bkin I was surprised or shocked when I opened the door my mother waiting for me to fall asleep on the couch,it really makes me sad because it makes my mother I had to wait until late in the evening.
instantly my mother wake up....
and ask me, son you already dinner ??
and I answer no bu...
my mother direct stand up and take my dinner up to I finished.
After that,I got to sleep because the next day I had to go to the campus.
That's a little of the story attention of my mother.How a mother is very loving and loves to son until death.
So,make you all guys still have a mother don't waste your life guys and do rough to your mom.
REVISI :
BalasHapusTopic : The pride a son to his beloved mother
My mother is always very good to me and so valuable that sometimes I feel like I have no words to describe her. I have been told by many of my friends that I never really say what I feel, and the reason for this is because it is very hard for me to express my feelings. Every time I am in a situation that I have to express my feelings, I feel like my emotions are caged. The love I have for her is like a rose of eternity, it will never die, but unlike a rose, it will prick not only through my skin, but through my heart and soul. There are even some times when my mother questions if I love her because I hardly ever show her.